Throughout this grand pattern of things you'll secure a B- for effort. Where you confused us was in all the specifics. You know, people say, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be much more true here. Having said that, allow me say to you what did work. The writing is actually very persuasive and this is probably why I am making an effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, whilst I can notice the leaps in reason you come up with, I am definitely not certain of exactly how you appear to unite the points which inturn produce the final result. For right now I shall yield to your issue but trust in the near future you actually link the dots much better.