In this amazing pattern of things you get a B+ just for effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually lost everybody was first in your specifics. You know, it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be more correct here. Having said that, permit me inform you what did do the job. The article (parts of it) is extremely convincing and that is most likely the reason why I am taking an effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, whilst I can notice a jumps in logic you make, I am not really confident of exactly how you seem to unite your details which in turn produce the actual conclusion. For right now I will, no doubt yield to your point however wish in the future you connect the facts better.