Throughout the awesome design of things you actually receive an A for effort. Where exactly you actually confused everybody was on the particulars. You know, they say, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more correct here. Having said that, allow me say to you precisely what did give good results. Your article (parts of it) can be incredibly persuasive and that is probably the reason why I am making the effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, whilst I can easily notice a jumps in logic you make, I am not certain of exactly how you seem to connect the points which inturn make the conclusion. For the moment I will yield to your issue however trust in the near future you link the dots much better.